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:smt006 Absolutely amazing Amanda. Great job. Just a few things that you might want to check over. Let's review; You need more punctuation! You only used comas in this poem ...

Hello; First off I'd like to say this is a wonderful poem. Very well written and you certainly get your point across. But there are a few things that I ...

This is really good I love it!! The emotion you put into this really touches the reader. In the second line of the first stanza though, you might want to ...

Time gives us a present, Even a past and a future. It;s the bottom line. Without it, we wouldn't be whole. Time makes us who we are, And so much ...

Hey Exialac! I'll be looking at your poem today! First of all, I would like to say that your poem is very good, especially for your first poem. But, in ...

Hi again! I really like your poetry, so I will try to review as much of it as I can. It looks like the above people all ready covered the ...

Greetings Fragile! I love this poem. You've made it very easy for the reader to relate to what's going on in the poem, and I like that. Just one little ...

Outofthebox, I will review your poem today. I'm a little bad at reviewing, especially a poem as well written as yours. First,good work. I really enjoyed reading this. It had ...

Is there a fog? Making you not see- See the love that clogs. The love I have for thee? Do you know how much it hurts? You talk about her, ...

Hey Unstable! Okay, so the first reviewer got most of the details. First I would like to say, nice job on this one. You're really turning into a good poet. ...

Elizabeth, Bravo! I really love this poem! I don't think you should get rid of the repetition at all! You just want to make sure you spell everything correctly, you ...

Bonjour Burgs! I really enjoyed this poem, and especially for your first one. You could really imagine what was going on, and how you can find a lot of things, ...

Can't you see her tears? The ones she's been shedding for years. Don't you miss her smile? The one she had all the while; You broke her. Do you enjoy ...

I LOVE this poem! I completely agree! It has even inspired me to write things of my own. I love this poem so much! And I know what it is ...

This is truly a work of art! I love the way this flows! Bravo emotionally(un)stable!! Bravo! Keep the poems coming, even if you did just come up with it, it ...