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Nice job! I liked the way you handled this story, however it might have been best to leave even more out. I like having the mystery behind the man himself...got ...

As Joshua walked along the pond’s blue rim, crisp autumn air sent vigorous chills throughout his entire body. The young boy continuously gripped his jacket while tugging it closer to ...

Oops my bad...I forgot about the 'language' :?

Haha! Nice ending.

I love my sister and all, I mean she’s the one who dragged me to this performance in the first place, but can’t she take a hint? Let’s be honest ...

Guess who...lol, I really like it :D The message is really inspiring, and I think it was really well written. I like it because of how meaningful it is, and ...

0o0o kewwl! I like the graphic-ish stuff you did...very nice x]

I didnt' really mean for it to be good...I was just really bored, and didn't feel like I wrote that. Thanks for the advice anyways!

There once was a mailman named Mr. Freddy. He would deliver mail to people because he was a mailman. One day he went to my house and delivered my mail. ...

Yeah it's pretty much just a draft I put together last night because I didn't want my idea to slip away from me. Thanks for the encouragement guys! I'll make ...

I love my sister and all, I mean she’s the one who dragged me to this performance in the first place, but can’t she take a hint? Let’s be honest ...

Alleluia! Now that's what I call a masterpiece...and whoever thinks otherwise just doesn't know the difference between true talent and everything else! Bravo my friend...but there is one little bittie

I would only change your choice of words in some areas of this piece. Other than that I thought the overall product came out nice. Also, watch your grammer spelling...but ...

Hey everyone! I recently joined out of boredom, but I'm finding this site very helpful...I love to write, and I'm hoping to get the most out of whatever you guys ...