xLogan

Thanks Mizzle & Peanut. You can call me X or Logan, maybe even xLogan? Haha, I'll answer the questions now - D'you love or hate marmite? Never tried it. Dogs ...

Here ya' go - Sorry if it's suck-ish. :lol:

Oh, and this is the rough draft; still needs some tweaking and stuff. So, suggestions would be nice.

Wow, awesome story. I got into it immediately, it like.. pulled me in. The title of the story is good also. I cried when she was leaving his house; :cry: ...

Awesome story. I almost cried at the ending. :oops: :cry: :lol: I am very sensitive when it comes to this stuff.. Anyways, it's a good story. I found a few ...

I agree, it was rushed. And, don't use abbreviations like NY, spell it out. Use imagery so readers will get drawn in and can see it in their heads.. The ...

MY EXPERIENCE IN THE HOUSE. I drove down the never-ending road, and saw that I was running on empty. A big, red sign passed that read, "NEXT GAS STATION - ...

I'm here! I joined FictionPress recently, my account there is "My name is Logan and I am still a student in school, (not in college yet,) I plan on being ...