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I love this poem, it i so sweet and incredibly true - why wont people see what we have done to the earth? i thought it flowed perfectly, like a ...

Thnks, any suggestions though of how i could make it better??? :D

lol, he teacher made me rub them out :D

Hope you like! please review, good and bad reviews welcome

Not my best work but i hope you like!

I don't usually do pictures like this, but it was for my art homework and i had to make everything in proportion. i know one eye is slightly bigger than ...

Im really offended that you said "dont read if you have depression" yea the poem was good but that is so insulting, my mother had serios depression and you saying ...

you say that on side is more detailed than the other - i copied the right side and pasted it to the left! so i dont know how thats possible! ...

wow thats a lot of "i love it!" lol great review, :D i will edit it soon, and i will try to make it better :D thankya all for all ...

wow thanks for your reviews! wow i got it so wrong didnt i? all those full stops and commas... ive got loads to learn! :D

I loved it! very emotional, very sad, i love the last part where you say her pale eyes droop the word scarlot is also good, instead of just saying blood ...

Wel this was one of my first attempts at a poem! but im glad you liked it :D jake is infact her best friend, they are just young kids having ...

You can't control me I'm free now, understand? I'm free now So back away Possessive is a great word That's just how I describe you Oh, don't you like that? ...

Thankyou! :D wow i love nice reviews!

AW! its so sweet! they look so in love lol The boys are is slightly odd but i like it anyway, makes it even sweeter :D It doesnt really look ...