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Chapter 1 I'm shattered. All I want to do is collapse on the kitchen floor and sleep but Ive got dishes to do and homework to forget. Ive just got ...

That was amazing. It almost made me cry, i am such a wuss but still it has that affect on me. It was powerful and i loved it, but i ...

That was beautiful, its so... i dont know how to describe it! Pure is a good word, it is pure and unstoppable love and passion. I thought you did an ...

I fall I feel my hair whipping my face The air rushes past my ears like a roar I squeeze my eyes shut The water hits me like a wall ...

That was so sweet! It was really like watching your little sister grow up, through your eyes, i felt your emotions so easily from your poem - it was beautifully ...

i thought that was amazing, you are very talented! i was a bit confused at first, because i think it could have had more explanation about what the main character ...

That sounded awesome! it is the kind of book i would love to read, im so curiose to find out about what happens - no bad comments, it was perfect!

Edward slowly slid his sword from his sheaf, his long fingers gently gripping the handle and letting the steel fall to his side. His tall, thin frame stood ready and ...

That was brilliant. I felt like i was getting pulled into the story - i want more! I thought it was great how it was set out, i really felt ...

I thought it was brilliant. I felt myself getting drawn into the story, it was pulling me in, i wanted to know everything about the characters. One thing though, i ...

Eevie leaned against the garden fence, looking out at the beautiful scenery. It was breathtaking. The glorious sun poured over the landscape, making everything alive. Fields of bright yellow and ...

:D well it was only my first try! i know my spelling is rubbish... and my sentences are VERY long, but i think i did ok my first try :D ...

i thought that was great! i loved how you described the setting, it really made me feel like it was there, but i thought you could have told us more ...

This is a scene from a book i am writing, about a girl who has grown up in the human country and she has ran away from home, after finding ...

wow i love the cliffhanger - i want to read more! i think it needs some more though, more explanation, more descriptions - what do the sprites look like? what ...