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Re: My Boyfriends a Moongod - Chapter 2
Lol thanks, that was a lot of info to take in! i do sooo need to improve my grammer and punctuation... but im working on it :D
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Frozen lakes and sugar cakes
Frozen lakes and sugar cakes Daffodils and paint spills Computer screens and fairy dreams First loves and silver doves... Falling snow and cupids bow Dusty books and dirty looks Sweet ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Love.
I liked your peice, but i kind of have my own view on love.... confusing, that is the only word that i could describe it. If we all had the ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: My story.
a similar thing also happened to me, it must be so common... i was just thirteen but i was so besotted in love with him that i just wanted him ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: The bill
Im happy to say that im your first review! I really liked it! im so curiose to what the bill was, but i think the poem could have been more ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: I never told you I loved you
thanks, i love nice reviews! I just wrote the poem off the top of my head so i wasnt that sure about the ending itself, but i just wanted to ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: A hole in your heart
I liked it, it was simple and said a lot to me - keep it up! i want to read more! :D
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Flying Dragon
I just used an ordinary pen
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Open Your Mind
I loved it! I love it where you say about its the indipendant thinkers that changed the world, not people who follwo the crowd. I totally agree. The only thing ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: They Laugh.
I liked it, it was a bit confusing... i didnt eally understand it untilli read your little note at the top. It says on here that before you put poems ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: LeMar Chapter 1
It was good, i so wanted to read more but it seemed to be over so fast! i thought aswell that it was a high school shooting thing, but i ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Time
I love it, it was so true, non of it was a lie :D it was written really well, and it has so mcuh meaning behind the words, they are ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Snow Photo 1
Wow pretty! I love it when it snows, but in soggy england it never does! lol it might be just me but the picture is massive so i have to ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: I never told you I loved you
I giggle as I swing my legs "You cant catch me!" I cry He just grins and climbs even faster Scrambling up through the branches the reach me I laugh ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Alone with the Ghost
woa that was scary! it kinda reminds me of The Ring lol but it was still awesome. i think it needed more description though. What did Pandora do when she ...
Sep 21, 2008
