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I liked it, i wanted to know more about what had happened to her and why she was running, i sort of know what is going on but its still ...

I liked it, its the first poem on here that i have read about your best friend hurting you, and i think you really expressed your emotions in it. One ...

lol i recorded myself drawing this and put it on youtube, so you can see how i did it by going to --- there is three more vids afterwards, lol, ...

I love it, its like how i imagen a princess or something from a fantasy story, i thought you did the hair really nice and it all flowed, not just ...

Lol thanks! they are such nice reviews, im so greatful! lol i was afraid that people wuldnt like it but hey, you gotta accept some comments that arnt always good. ...

Lol the green ketchup was a tricky thing to put in... but i only put it there because green ketchup is actually real and it tastes gorgeose! lol i know ...

It was great, i really felt the love between them and their frustration lol im only fifteen so ive never really had that sort of relationship and to be honest ...

I really liked it, it was so different from the normal things where "red = blood and red = hate blah blah blah" I think you described the colour red ...

Yes the flashback confused me too - which part came first? the first part with the sex or the second part with them in class? i still really liked it ...

I just used an ordianry pen to watch how i drew it, click on this link, it goes to youtube and you can watch how i did it! :D :D

Thanks, i love this poem, ive written loads of poems in the past and this has to be one of my favourites :D thankyou all for your nice comments! i ...

I really liked it! I thought you really put loads of heart into it, like you were really writing about a person knew i love poems like this, where you ...

I took your advise and changed the last line - i think it looks and sounds better! thanain for your nice review :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

I never told anyone how much i cry every night so I could smile for you the next day. i think that is one of the most heartwarmimg things i ...

Lol yea it is a bit too long... i write VERY long sentences! :D