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beautiful :D much better - i couldnt see it before! :P

I liked it, it showed your personality in just a few well chosen words and that was great. i sort of agree though that "this is me" was repeated too ...

I'm a glass child, still a child. I could be broken by the slightest heartache. I'm a woman, made of stone. I'm fierce and strong. No man can fool me ...

thankyou :D im sorry i made you cry! *gives tishoo* the poem isnt the best i dont think, it still needs work so when i get some time ill try ...

Thanks, im still learning, i only wrote my first poem a month ago lol, and i have real trouble trying to make them look neat, they are still so raw ...

wow i wish i could draw like that, i can draw ok i guess but im useless at horses and cars! that mini cooper was amazing - how did you ...

I loved "rain kissed rose" where the sunlight shines down, you could see all the colours that you dont usually get to see in pictures from light - and those ...

wow that was.... amazing! your only thirteen (god i feel so old - im only two years older!) but i loved it all the way, i cant rhym to save ...

thankyou so much, but when you said i should put "i never wanted it to die" no because the girl who is the narrator is dead and she says "i ...

thankyou so much! I was playing around with this poem for a few weeks, just in notebooks and stuff and i wasnt sure it would really come to anythng. i ...

Thankyou so much for your reviews! yea it was so difficult to do this, dragged up some old memories :? lol but im happy with the result. Ill try and ...

Its so beautiful! I knew instantly it was notre dam :D only because of the hunchback of notre dam film lol, but yeait looks so sparkly, the water and the ...

It is love Love is like having the ground beneath you disappear Love is like having the wind knocked out of you Love is like never wanting to not see ...

I loved it, momma a poppa sounded so sweet but emotional, i loved the beginning, it made me want to read more but i was kinda confused by the end... ...

welcome lol, you sound cool :D youll have loads of fun here, pm me if you wanna chat! :D