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Hey Elinor! I read this this morning, but I'm back now to review :) First impressions, it's peaked my interest. That's not to say that it's not unoriginal. The whole, ...

Hey Shannon! I've been waiting ages for you to post something. I seriously owe you a review, seeing as you review every chapter of my novel. This isn't going to ...

Hey there Mickixoxo! Wow. I mean, there's a lot of pieces on YWS at the moment that express this theme, but your piece stands out to me the most so ...

Yo, Audy! I wasn't going to review today, because work has zapped the motivation from me, but then I saw you'd posted this and I knew I had to comment ...

Hey Mia! It's so awesome to read something or yours again. It feels like forever ago that I did. You should come around more often. *Puppy dog eyes* So, this ...

Hey MorningMist! This piece was great. You had me on tenterhooks throughout the whole story. The title had already made me come to the conclusion that the piano exam wasn't ...

Hey Catri! I think that all of these have the potential to be expanded into a larger story. The one that stood out the most to me was the fourth ...

Hey again! I'm definitely enjoying this story. I've said it before, but it really is easy to read. You've definitely put some thought into making it flow well. Sam's thoughts ...

Hey again! "Thanks so much, Mr. G." he said gratefully. 'Mr' should be 'Mrs' That's the only mistake I found, so well done there. Your description was great in this ...

Hey there creativity! I saw this this other day but didn't have time to review, so I'm back now! As the other reviewers have already mentioned, I found this insanely ...

Hey TheScratchMan! I've read your work before, but I've never given you a review... So, here we go! I love the mystery in this. It's all like, 'Ahh! What's going ...

Hey there dylanray! I'm not really one for prologues as sometimes they can just bog a story down, but I liked this one. I think it was a great way ...

Hey BrokenSkye! Aww, this was so sad. I was hoping so much that the girl was going to turn out to be his cousin or something, and that after she ...

Hey Walker! You know, it was actually a little strange reading a story of yours with dialogue. I'd forgotten how good at that you were too. *Pouts* Anyway, the ending ...

Hey Jas! I'm so glad you're back to posting this again. I was only thinking about this story the other day. I'm sorry it took you this long to write ...