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Hey Smurf! I hope you're having fun on holiday with no YWS :P Anyway, I'm here for a review, obviously. I mean, I'm not here to ask for fish and ...

Goo's here as promised, Smurf! Firstly, I agree with the points that Tanya raised, about Charlie bringing Austin to the cliff. You didn't mention before that they hung out there. ...

Smurf! Goo here as promised :) I scanned the rest of the race to check that Luke hadn’t shoved any other fictional books into the wrong place Scanned the rest ...

Hey Yoda! I think this was pretty developed for a story of only 250 words or less. You had dialogue, and a setting, and some characters (duh), but I felt ...

Hey thatoddkid! You know I love the way you write with such ease. It makes your stories such a joy to read, even when they're about something negative. You're always ...

Hey PrincessOfDarkness! I read this the other day and was going to review but didn't have the time. I came back, all ready with my points, but it looks like ...

Hey there Forestqueen! For a pretty basic plot; girl writes letter to boy to tell him she's finally moved on and that she's stronger without him. And a pretty short ...

Hey there! Nice idea for a story you have here :) I agree with Elinor though, in that this could be so much more. It's way to telly, and I ...

Hey Brandon! This piece is certainly different to your other entry, but I liked it. The change in styles was good and, like TheBlackSheep said, the whole piece held my ...

Yo, Smurf! I've just watched Battle Los Angeles, so all I can hear in my head is gun shots and explosions. But I'll try to ignore that and stay focused ...

Brandon! I'm here :) So, I see what you meant when you said you had a really different theme to mine ;) I think you did a good job of ...

Hey there Amelia! Great job on this. It flowed well, and I really think you captured the emotions you expressed, well. The ending made me shiver. It's so true that ...

Hey Lileh! This was so sweet. The part about the barn being on fire made me sad though. Poor Travis :( “Wow, Daddy, can I have a pig,” Gabby exclaimed. ...

Hey there otherone! I don't really have time for a proper review, but I thought I'd comment anyway. This piece seems a lot better than the one you wrote before. ...

Smurfy! You shouldn't apologise for posting more of this. You're helping to feed my addiction! been limp of meaning. I can't decide whether 'been of limp meaning' would sound better ...