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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chase - Prologue

    Hey there Gen! I'm not really one for prologues but the title caught my eye, so I came for a gander :) First off, your opening line is great. At ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Seeing Jack

    Hey Elinor! I read this this morning, but I'm back now to review :) First impressions, it's peaked my interest. That's not to say that it's not unoriginal. The whole, ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Desperate Times and Stupid measures

    Hey Shannon! I've been waiting ages for you to post something. I seriously owe you a review, seeing as you review every chapter of my novel. This isn't going to ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Would You Understand?

    Hey there Mickixoxo! Wow. I mean, there's a lot of pieces on YWS at the moment that express this theme, but your piece stands out to me the most so ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kissing Alfredo

    Yo, Audy! I wasn't going to review today, because work has zapped the motivation from me, but then I saw you'd posted this and I knew I had to comment ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Black waters.

    Hey Mia! It's so awesome to read something or yours again. It feels like forever ago that I did. You should come around more often. *Puppy dog eyes* So, this ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Scarlet Ivory

    Hey MorningMist! This piece was great. You had me on tenterhooks throughout the whole story. The title had already made me come to the conclusion that the piano exam wasn't ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Collection of 50 Words

    Hey Catri! I think that all of these have the potential to be expanded into a larger story. The one that stood out the most to me was the fourth ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the avatar above you! [5]

    8 - It took me a moment to figure out what it was :P

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: The singing game

    Just a phone call away - Forever the sickest kids. Do you believe?

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 3

    Hey again! I'm definitely enjoying this story. I've said it before, but it really is easy to read. You've definitely put some thought into making it flow well. Sam's thoughts ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 2

    Hey again! "Thanks so much, Mr. G." he said gratefully. 'Mr' should be 'Mrs' That's the only mistake I found, so well done there. Your description was great in this ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 1

    Hey there creativity! I saw this this other day but didn't have time to review, so I'm back now! As the other reviewers have already mentioned, I found this insanely ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]

    Chelsea Dagger - The Fratellis

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: The singing game

    Tokyo (Vampires and Wolves) - The Wombats. Why is the sky blue?

    Dec 4, 2011


I cannot separate the aesthetic pleasure of seeing a butterfly and the scientific pleasure of knowing what it is.
— Vladmir Nabokov