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Hey =] Wow! I absolutely loved it even though it was really sad. The description was balanced with the dialouge and your characters were brilliantly described. I loved Martha's character ...

Hey =] I really enjoyed reading this and as "PirateP" said, i think it has a lot of potential. I did notice that you used the word 'said' a lot ...

Hey =] I'm back! I enjoyed part two just as much a part one. I really like where this is going and am intrigued to find out what happens in ...

Hey =] I really enjoyed this! A story where two friends finally realise their feelings for eachother, in my opinion, never fails to be a good read. I like your ...

Hey =] Once again i really enjoyed this story. i like how it's progressing but i can't help feeling that it's going to turn into another one of those, 'the ...

Hey =] I enjoyed this chapter just as much as the others and am still hooked! I still love the way you describe the settings and characters, it makes it ...

Hey =] Wow, i really like this. I was drawn right in from the start of part one right until the end. I think your writing style is great and ...

Hey =] Yet again i loved it and am still hooked! My only nit pik is the same as 'lhighton.' I was a bit confused as to who actually proposed ...

Hey =] Aww this piece made me smile. At first i thought it was going to be another - "i hate myself, why can't i be perfect," piece, but you ...

So here it is. I only came across the contest today, so here's what two hours of non-stop writing has produced. Reviews and comments will be greatly appreciated. Hope you ...

Hey =] I really like this. It was easy to read and flowed well. Your take on the cliche has got me hooked, so i'll definitely be reading the next ...

Hey =] I definitely think you have a good concept for a story. I did notice that you used the word, 'dirty,' quite a few times. Maybe you could replace ...

Hey =] Wow! You totally have me hooked =] Zahra definitely gives me the creeps lol I'm not very good at grammatic reviews but maybe you could try describing how ...

Hey I really liked this - very cleverly written and it describes just how i'm feeling at the moment. I'm half a chapter away from finishing my third book but ...

Hey =] Wow! I really love this story. Your writing style is so strong and I love the way you describe settings and emotions. So vivid :D Can't wait to ...