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Hey =] So I stumbled across this section of the forum and thought 'why not introduce myself' even though i've been on here for almost a month. I don't have ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Oh my God - I absolutely loved it. The way you described everything made it seem as if i was right there with Holly. ...

Hey =] Aww - i really loved this - you already know i love the way you write! The imagery was brilliant and it flowed really well. I watched as ...

Hey again =] I enjoyed reading this and I really like where it's heading. Now for my nit-piks; Instead of turning my alarm of, - 'of' should be 'off' “Cassandra ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Now for my nit-piks; They nodded and I climbed up the steps. I paused as I stood outside Luke's white bedroom door. - maybe ...

Hey =] I really like the idea for this story and you managed to turn from looking cliche to quite original in this chapter. Here are a few nit-piks; I ...

Hey =] YWS has a rule where you should review two pieces of work before posting a piece of your own - bear this in mind when you next post ...

Hey =] I still really like this story. Gosh, I feel so sorry for Veronica and I really hate Keith now. A wave of emotions crashed down on her, battering ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM. I enjoyed this just as much as part one. I like the way you've developed the awkwardness between Autumn and her mum. I can ...

Hey =] Thank you all so much for your reviews and comments - you've all been so helpful! Thechocolatewritingcat- Just to let you know that the 'her,' is the girl ...

Hey! Thanks for letting me know that this part was up - can you please PM me when part 8 is up too? I love your description of the dress ...

Hey! I thought i'd review your work as you seem to be following my story - Imo: Split personality. I like the concept of the story. It seems to fit ...

Hey =] I'm back again and i absolutely loved it. It was so sweet and i'm so glad she married him in the end even if it is cliche, but ...

So this is the first chapter of my book Lily Foxglove. I've finished the book and it's now with my literary agent, but after joining this amazing website i feel ...

Hey =] I really liked this. You built up a good background to your MC's life using memories and conversations and i liked the way you changed the mood of ...