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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Breakdown-Prologue. First Edit

    Hey Colleen =] Wow, you have so many different ideas for stories! I find it hard to stick to one idea too - that's how my third story 'Imo' came ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Another Sunset Chapter Two Part One

    Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Most of the nit-piking seems to have been done already so I'll just review the story line. I definitely think this part has helped ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Jinx

    Hey =] I really enjoyed 'Jinx' too! Like 'queenb4ever,' it's the only Meg Cabot book I've ever read, but after reading 'Jinx' a couple of months ago, I'd definitely consider ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Well, it's me!

    Hey =] Nice to know more about you! I have a cat too, his names Spike :) Sorry to hear about your guinea pig :( I had two, Jake and ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    Earlier in the thread someone brought up 'Jodi Picoult.' I tried reading one of her books because a friend of mine said I should, but I only got to page ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Lily Foxglove (2.1) *edited*

    Hey =] Thank you to everyone who read chapter one. I'm totally unsure about this chapter and it's annoying me. Please give your opinions on it as I feel that ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: The real xDudettex

    Hey Pippiedooda =] Yeah - We called our cat Spike because he's quite anti-social lol - 'Fluffy,' wouldn't really have suited him :lol: Yay! You like Paramore too =] Umm ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Say You Mean It - 2.1

    Hey =] Thanks for the Pm! I'm still enjoying this story. Nit-piks; on the wooden floor - 'onto the wooden floor' dragged her way across the room . - 'dragged ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Death

    Hey =] This was totally gory and not really my sort of story, but I enjoyed it none the less. Nit-piks; I knew he knew I was there. - This ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: slight smile

    Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I really liked this. The concept is original and that in a sense made it more enjoyable to read. Most of the nit-piking has been ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I... well, I... I mean - um...

    Hey nixonblitzen =] Nice to meet you! 11. I have a really good memory and I love quoting movies, especially if it involves weird accents. In fact, I often run ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: The real xDudettex

    Thanks Siiham - it's nice to meet you too! Fluteluvr77 - Don't worry, I'm sure you'll finish a book soon =] And thank you - Paramore does rock! Oh well ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Imo: Split Personality (3)

    Hey =] Here's chapter three. Hope you like it! Reviews will be greatly appreciated, even if it's just to say whether you enjoyed it or not. I’d had to jog ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Another Sunset Chapter One Part Three

    Hey =] I'm back again! Thanks for the PM. Nit-piks first; I kept walking thinking about the days events. - i'd add a comma after 'walking.' When I walked in ...

    Mar 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: This Pen is Retired

    Hey =] I don't usually review poetry, but I was just clicking around and the title caught my attention so I decided to read and I'm glad I did. I ...

    Mar 1, 2009


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