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Re: Breakdown-Prologue. First Edit
Hey Colleen =] Wow, you have so many different ideas for stories! I find it hard to stick to one idea too - that's how my third story 'Imo' came ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset Chapter Two Part One
Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Most of the nit-piking seems to have been done already so I'll just review the story line. I definitely think this part has helped ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Jinx
Hey =] I really enjoyed 'Jinx' too! Like 'queenb4ever,' it's the only Meg Cabot book I've ever read, but after reading 'Jinx' a couple of months ago, I'd definitely consider ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Well, it's me!
Hey =] Nice to know more about you! I have a cat too, his names Spike :) Sorry to hear about your guinea pig :( I had two, Jake and ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Earlier in the thread someone brought up 'Jodi Picoult.' I tried reading one of her books because a friend of mine said I should, but I only got to page ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Lily Foxglove (2.1) *edited*
Hey =] Thank you to everyone who read chapter one. I'm totally unsure about this chapter and it's annoying me. Please give your opinions on it as I feel that ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: The real xDudettex
Hey Pippiedooda =] Yeah - We called our cat Spike because he's quite anti-social lol - 'Fluffy,' wouldn't really have suited him :lol: Yay! You like Paramore too =] Umm ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Say You Mean It - 2.1
Hey =] Thanks for the Pm! I'm still enjoying this story. Nit-piks; on the wooden floor - 'onto the wooden floor' dragged her way across the room . - 'dragged ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Death
Hey =] This was totally gory and not really my sort of story, but I enjoyed it none the less. Nit-piks; I knew he knew I was there. - This ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: slight smile
Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I really liked this. The concept is original and that in a sense made it more enjoyable to read. Most of the nit-piking has been ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: I... well, I... I mean - um...
Hey nixonblitzen =] Nice to meet you! 11. I have a really good memory and I love quoting movies, especially if it involves weird accents. In fact, I often run ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: The real xDudettex
Thanks Siiham - it's nice to meet you too! Fluteluvr77 - Don't worry, I'm sure you'll finish a book soon =] And thank you - Paramore does rock! Oh well ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Imo: Split Personality (3)
Hey =] Here's chapter three. Hope you like it! Reviews will be greatly appreciated, even if it's just to say whether you enjoyed it or not. I’d had to jog ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset Chapter One Part Three
Hey =] I'm back again! Thanks for the PM. Nit-piks first; I kept walking thinking about the days events. - i'd add a comma after 'walking.' When I walked in ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: This Pen is Retired
Hey =] I don't usually review poetry, but I was just clicking around and the title caught my attention so I decided to read and I'm glad I did. I ...
Mar 1, 2009
