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Hey =] Thanks to everyone who has read and reviewed so far! This part's quite short but I hope you enjoy it =] Sunday the 8th of July. After yesterdays ...

Hey Erica =] I'm not very good at writing or reviewing poetry so I'll just give my thoughts. I think the poem was very well written and you used a ...

Hey =] Forgive me if I'm wrong - I can be a bit simple sometimes - But do you want us to make up a character for you? If you ...

Hey =] Nice to meet you! I dropped out of college too - I managed a year and four months :D I was studying English literature and English language, but ...

Hey Rosey =] Thanks again for reviewing my CIA cotest entry - like I said before, your comments were really helpful. For this reason I'd like to know if you ...

Hey asxz =] You said you were bored so would you please be so kind as to review my March CIA contest entry? Your opinion will be greatly appreciated! It's ...

seeing as everyone else is doing it. Here's a photo of me and my best friend Tila taken a couple of months ago. I have no idea what we were ...

Hey =] I'm back again. Nit-piks; I grabbed the Sasha - I'd take out 'the' moments ago - 'moments before' would sound better. Thalia saw me and, her eyebrows once ...

Hey =] This was interesting and I'd like to read more. Like Rosey, I like the way you shaped the relationship between Evie and her sister. The behaviour and dialogue ...

Hey =] Wow, I loved this part. I totally didn't see that coming! I love the idea of keeping Holly in the story and combining her with Esmerald. I know ...

Hey =] I said I'd be here and here I am! Nit-piks first; That morning I was more nervous then I ever had been in my whole life. - I'd ...

Hey =] Thanks for the tips and comments. I'll try and re-write/ re-arrange the first couple of paragraphs so they read better and I'll add in a bit more detail ...

Hey =] So here's my March CIA contest entry. I wasn't going to enter, but then my imagination struck whilst I was at work so I decided to give it ...

Hey, I'm back =] Aww I'm so glad Cassie got in, Cecelia deserves the competition - it's annoying how some people just seem to get everything in life. Nit-piks; There ...

Hey KJ =] Thanks for the PM! I really liked this part. The last part helped us to explore the relationship between Autumn and her Mum and I think the ...