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Hey Pippie =] Thanks for the PM! This part was good, but it seemed a little slow paced compared to the ones previous to it. Maybe that's why you don't ...

Hey Lydia =] Welcome to YWS! I'll leave the rules for someone else to explain So...What type of genre do you write? Wait...You're from too :D I'm so glad we've ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! I don't think that chapter was awful at all! It just seemed a little slow paced as you took the time to explain memories ...

Hey! I'm back again =] Nit-piks first... Throughout the entire summer -I'd add a comma after 'summer' As it turns out I was right, the kids were a lot more ...

Hey =] I thought I'd take a look at your story as you reviewed mine :) Nit-piks first - though most seem to have already been covered so I'll try ...

Hey Evi =] I really enjoyed reading this :D You definitely succeeded in giving me goosebumps! It flowed really well and you managed to keep the suspense from start to ...

Hey again =] I really enjoyed this! I still love your writing style and I think the piece flowed really well. I still feel so sorry for Mariadelle, but I'm ...

Hey =] Mine isn't exactly 'weird' but I tend to use music as inspiration. I've just frinished my third book but when I was writing it, I was stuck at ...

Hey =] So thanks to everyone who has read and reviewed the previous parts to this =] I hope you enjoy it! Chapter 4 Sighing with relief as I finally ...

Haha - thank you! I think we must have been high on sugar or something lol :D

Aww - everyone on here is so pretty! Here's another pic of mine. It's of me and my two best friends about a year ago - we were messing about ...

Hey Lucyy =] Please could you review chapter one of my story; Lily Foxglove. I'd really appreciate it if you could :D Thank you! xDudettex

Hey mimimac =] Please could you review my story; Lily Foxglove, chapter one - it's in other fiction. I'd really appreciate it if you could :D xDudettex

Hey again =] Wow - I really loved this part :D I couldn't really spot any nik-piks but that might have been because I was so immersed in the story ...

Hey =] Wow - I really enjoyed reading this! It took me awhile to get into it, but before I knew it I was finished reading the whole piece - ...