xDudettex

Haha...this actually sounds a bit like me :lol: Like the other day, me and my friend went out clubbing and were (almost) attacked by this crazy man who thought he ...

Hey =] I've been reading this but never reviewed as I couldn't find anything constructive to point out. I love the way you are slowly building up Aline's character and ...

Hey =] I really like the concept for this story, but I agree with tnme22 in that we don't really know anything about any of your characters. This is partly ...

Hey =] I'm back again! I think I enjoyed this part more than the first. I love the relationship between Cal and Gwen. I can really imagine them having been ...

Hey Hannah! I really enjoyed reading this :D Everyone else seems to have already pointed out all of the nit-piks so I'll just give you one of those less helpful ...

Hey =] I'm so sorry Sela but I really couldn't find anything wrong with it - that isn't to say that others won't be able to either. Whenever I try ...

In an ideal world, I would be able to make a career out of writing. I've self published my first book, but in my opinion it was a waste of ...

Hey Daniella =] It's nice to know a bit more about you. OMG! I love Paramore - they are the best band of all time! I love Panic! at the ...

Hey =] I'm here as promised! I think Meadowlark pretty much covered all of the nit-piks, but I'll try my best! For a moment he stopped his continuous pacing to ...

Ooh - that's a toughie... Probably; Time to pretend by MGMT :D

Hey Smiley =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette *waves* Don't worry...I'm shy too but everyone here is so friendly so don't be afraid to ask any questions :D I'll leave ...

Hey =] The concept of this story is interesting, but I'm finding it a bit hard to understand. I think it would make more sense if you put the thoughts ...

Hey =] Thanks so much to those who have read and reviewed so far! This chapter is where it starts to get interesting (hopefully) so I'd really appreciate the help ...

Hey Borntoshop! I'll be glad to help you =] Nit-piks first; All through class I got notes chucked at me - 'All through class, notes were chucked at me.' - ...

Hey =] I'm not at all good at reviewing poetry, but I have to say that I really like this. The imagery you use in the first two stanzas is ...