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Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Nit-piks first; It's better to try valiantly and fail than to rest between mediocrity and average-ness.” - I don't know if it would read ...

Hey =] I really enjoyed reading this! It was nice to read something of yours :D I couldn't find any mistakes that haven't already been pointed out/sorted, so I'm just ...

Hey =] I like the idea of how you wrote this! He said it the night before and then before that. - Okay, it might just be me, but I ...

Hey =] So thank you so much to all of you who read and reviewed my prologue! This is all I have so far and I'd really like to know ...

Hey Rosey =] Glad to see that you're back! I was just wondering if you could review my new prologue. It's in Other Fiction, I know it's really short, but ...

Hey =] I've just read both parts of this and I really enjoyed it. This story seems really original - I haven't read a story from the point of view ...

Hey =] Well everyone else seems to have already picked out the mistakes, but I really felt that I needed to comment on how much I enjoyed reading this. Even ...

Hey there =] Congrats on becoming an instructor! I'd really appreciate it if you could review my prologue for me. The story is yet to have a title though. It's ...

Hey =] Since you did such a great job when you reviewed 'Letting Go' for me, I'd really appreciate it if you could review my prologue. The story is yet ...

Hey =] So I know that this is a very rough draft of a prologue and I had to write it down to stop myself from forgetting it. I'd just ...

Hey =] Thanks to everyone who has stuck with this story and the reviews that I've had have been really appreciated. I know that this needs improving so any ideas ...

Hey - me again =] This one's really good too! I wish I could write lyrics as good as this :D The road’s paved in silver And the smiles are ...

Hey =] Aww - that was so nice! I'm not really that good at reviewing poetry or lyrics but this was really good. The imagery was beautiful and it seemed ...

Hey =] I'll do my best to review this but I really couldn't find that much wrong with it. away, - The comma should be a full stop where Malc ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Nit-piks; They’d needed to bring her back for something, something very important… - I don't know if this would work better as two seperate ...