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Hey =] Wow - I really liked it. Like Pippie said - I like the way that you started with dialogue. It made me more alert as to what was ...

Hey =] I'm back! So, I enjoyed reading this part too and I'm definitely interested in staying with this story. I want to know what part the key will play ...

Hey =] As you've been so kind to review my Untitled stroy, I though I'd return the favour :D So it looks like I'm a tad late and all of ...

Hey =] I agree with EmmVeePi that this was an entertaining and original story. I've certainly never read a story from the point of view of a virus before. It ...

Hey =] Sorry - I was watching Gossip Girl lol Nit-piks first (if I can find any); It was an average day apart from that; me and Kels got our ...

Hey Rosey =] Could you please review the first chapter of my Untitled story? I'd really appreciate it if you could :D Thanks! xDudettex

Hey =] Just a quick thank you to all those who have read and/or reviewed the previous parts. Your help will be appreciated on this part too! Not that much ...

Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette :D Nit-piks first; The jock, hot shot ego maniac that was who I loved. - I think this sentence is missing some punctuation. ...

Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette :D Wow, this piece made me smile. It's so optimistic - well, the overall concept anyway. I so have days when I think, ...

Hey =] Wow! This was super creepy! I loved the imagery you used and I could really imagine myself in the forest with the faceless girl. I definitely think that ...

Hey =] I really liked this :) I couldn't find any other mistakes that haven't already been pointed out to you. I could really feel the pain that your MC ...

Hey =] I agree with ..:Ced:.. in that I think that this piece is really moving. Even though the concept is sad, I enjoyed reading it. I think you have ...

Hey =] I'm Dudette *waves* There are a few simple rules here but i'll let someone else explain them to you. I'm sure you'll enjoy your time here at YWS ...

Oooh! The Night Visitor by Pippiedooda is really good :D Creepy and suspenseful! Well worth checking out :D The link to part one - There's eleven parts out now I ...

Hey =] I really enjoyed reading this. It flowed well and the description of the library was lovely :) So the narrator is Rebecca's Mum, right? Because to me, the ...