xDudettex

Hey =] Ooh! I like this. You know how rubbish I am at reviewing poetry and lyrics, so I won't even try to sound intelligent by critiquing this properly. So, ...

Hey =] This story was so sad :( I felt so sorry for Micah! I can't really find anything else to pick out that Lucyy hasn't already pointed out to ...

Hey =] Wow - I love your characters attitude. It's nice to see a character with real gusto. It makes you MC seem a lot more realistic. I'm intrigued to ...

Hey =] I'm here as promised! So...Music and Evi seemed to have pointed out nearly everything, so there isn't actually much I can say without repeating their words of advice. ...

Hey =] I'm here! Can you review this for me, please? It's the first chapter though you might want to read the prologue first. - First chapter. As for what ...

Hey =] I thought I'd review this for ya' that laid, empty - I think 'laid' should be 'lay' "Why?" I questioned my brother, as if he were in front ...

Hey =] I agree with Music, in that this piece was wonderfully written. You truly are a brilliant writer. I loved the imagery that you used and the description was ...

Hey Pen =] I shall try and review this for ya'. I say try because I couldn't really find anything wrong with it. my ratty old Sketchers thumping like bass ...

Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette *waves* There are a few simple rules, but I'll let someone else explain them to you :) So...what genre do you like to ...

Hey =] I'd just like to say a massive 'thank you' to everyone who has helped me edit this story. The reviews you have all given have been wonderfully helpful! ...

Hey =] I'm back to review this part for ya' Nit-piks first; "Get off me!" I screamed, trying to wriggle out of the iron grasp of Jim. He just laughed. ...

Hey =] Thanks again to those who have stuck with this story. This part really needs work so I'd appreciate your thought and opinions. Hope you like it! xDudettex :D ...

Hey =] I thought I'd give you something to review :D It's the first part of chapter one of my Untitled story. It's in other fiction. I've posted a prologue ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! I couldn't really find any mistakes at all, but that may be because I was so engrossed in the story :) I love how ...

Hey =] I just have to say first that the title of this story caught my attention straight away - good job! So - I'm not really going to nit-pik, ...