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Hey dudes =] So I said I was going to post this like two weeks ago and I kind of... forgot :oops: Oh well. It's here now and I hope ...

Hey Yoda =] Thanks for letting me know that this was up :) So. I don't think that I can give you a proper grammatical review, 'cause everything that I ...

Hey Alyssh =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette and I'm going to try and review this for ya' Just a quick note before I begin though. We have a 2:1 ...

Hey Colleen =] I'm glad that you're back to writing this story :) I shall try and review it for ya' So... I opened cabinets violently looking for gauze wrap ...

Hey =] I saw that you'd posted something and didn't hesitate to take a closer look :) It was so nice to read something of yours after you've given such ...

Hey Erica =] Thanks for the PM! I'm glad that you're continuing with this story :) So, I'll try to review this for ya' which included the rest of the ...

Hey Meg =] Thanks for the PM! The problem is that it looks like a lawnmower with a beak. - I lol'd at this. Her drawing abilities appear to match ...

Hey Lisa =] Thanks for the PM! Sorry it's taken me so long but I've had a week long break from YWS in an attempt to edit my second story ...

Hey Angel =] Thanks for the PM! Sorry I'm a bit late, but I've had a weak off of YWS to try and edit my story. So, this story still ...

Hey Meg =] Sorry I'm a bit late... So. I think all of the structual and grammatical stuff has been covered, so I'll just give you my overall opinion of ...

Hey Angel - you don't mind if I call you that, do you? =] So. Like the reviewers above, I couldn't find many grammatical mistakes at all. I must say ...

Hey Kara =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette and I'm going to attempt to review this for ya' :D Ah yes, it was Friday the thirteenth that day. - It ...

Hey Esmé =] Wow. That was definitely intense. a clatter so loud that matching the little shriek that escapes my breast. - I don't think this sentence is worded right. ...

Hey Terpsichore =] I'm Dudette and I'm going to attempt to review this for ya' So. I honestly couldn't find that much wrong with it! You shouldn't be scared to ...

Hey =] I'm here as I said I would be :) So, there weren't many nit-piks at all, and I think Mars got all of the ones that I would ...