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Re: Curiousity found the Polar bear
Hey =] So, first off, I know the title sucks. This story only came about because I was complaining to my friend that I had writers block and she wrote ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: First Chapter - (temp. title) The Road Ahead
Hey =] So, I liked this as a start to a story, but I definitely agree with everything that the above reviewer has mentioned. At the moment, the reader doesn't ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: The time chasers (16+ for references to foul words)
Hey =] I don't really have anything grammatical or nit-piky to point out, but I couldn't not comment on this. I really loved the way you described everything and the ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: 27 - Prologue
Hey =] This isn't a genre that I usually read, but having been off of YWS for so long, I fancied a change of scenery/genre for once. And I'm glad ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Shadowdance ((NEW)) 2
Hey =] I'm back to review part two, although the reviewer above already seems to have pointed out everything that I had planned to. I like the way the story ...
Nov 17, 2009 -
Re: Song stuck in your head?
New perspective by Panic! at the disco :D I
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: The Man and the Moon
Hey =] I don't have time to give this the proper review that it deserves, and frankly I don't think I can; I struggled to find mistakes or things I'd ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Shadowdance ((New)) 1
Hey Silversun =] Nice start to a story - the concept already has me interested and wanting to know more. Sureal already noted most of the main nit-piks, but I ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: No title (suggestions welcome)
Hey =] I like the idea you have for this story; it seems original and that's a good thing in my opinion. There's nothing worse than reading the same old ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: What's On Your iPod?
Ha - I have way too many so I'll just list some favourites :) Paramore All time low Avril Lavigne Fall out boy Metro station Go:Audio Elliot Minor Panic! at ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: What are you listening to right now?
The All American Rejects - The wind blows :)
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: A New Hop in Clyss - Chapter One
Hey =] I'm back! Anyway, I can now see why the prologue is the prologue as this part seems to be set some time on from the last part. I ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: A New Hop in Clyss - Prologue
Hey =] I don't think there's any real point in me attempting to review this properly - mainly because the other reviewers have done such a great job already. I ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Following Your Heart is Hard To Do
Hey =] So I liked this so far and I could only find a couple of nit-piks to point out =] .’ but I think you should make the full ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Gone [prologue]
Hey =] I haven't reviewed a piece of work for at least four months, so I'm feeling a bit rusty, but I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this ...
Nov 8, 2009