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Hey again! So chapter two doesn't really let us in on anymore of the plot than chapter one did, but I'm pleased to say you've still got me intrigued to ...

Hey Teddy! I haven't read any of your work in ages, so I thought I'd have a little read through this. Although it was short, you managed to give us ...

Hey Tinkembell! I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you :) So, for a first chapter, I think you did well in making me want to read ...

Hey Palip! I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you :) First off, I'd like to say well done for catching me off guard. I had a ...

Hey Lilicia! I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you :) First off. Wow! This is full of so much emotion. Sadness, anger, loss. It was an ...

Hey again! I just wanted to say that I think the changes you made have definitely benefited your story. The feelings you express really help to make me want to ...

Hey! Thanks for the PM :) Revenge isn't my stronger point. 'stronger' should be 'strong' - it sounds better. "Why are you dating him? Do you feel sorry for him? ...

Hey! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading this. It flowed well and I liked the way that you've already explained character dynamics so well, when it's ...

Hey! I thought this piece was cute and I like the way you told it from all of the character's perspectives. I will point out a few things I noticed; ...

Hey! I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you :) So, first of all, I liked it. It made me smile and I could relate to it ...

Hey! Dudette here to review for you :) So... Jix looked back to where Teric was having a headstand contest with a tree and ended up falling over, again, in ...

I've since edited this and posted it in romance novels where I hope to post chapters as I write them. You can now find the edited version here - :) ...

Hey! I haven't been active on here for a while so forgive me if this review isn't very helpful :) First off, thanks for a great read. It was an ...

Hey neversaynikki! I haven't reviewed on here for about six months, so forgive me if I'm not very helpful :) First off. Wow! I loved the intensity of this piece. ...

Hey =] Nice topic =] For me it's a tie between 'Gone' by Michael Grant and 'If you could see me now' by Cecelia Ahern. And to 'Urban,' this year ...