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Re: Through the Storm
Hey! I thought this was brilliant. You captured a moment of devastation well in your descriptions and I could really imagine myself standing with Katherine amongst the rubble. I did ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Jerabeth, Chapter 1: 2 thousand years later.
Hey! I thought I'd take a shot a reviewing this for you, seeing as you reviewed mine :) So, first impressions. It seems like you have a good start to ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: The Harpist
Hey Elinor! I had a quick read of you poem before I read this, just for some background. I thought this was so sad. Your MC was so lonely and ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Heroes Never Die, They Just Get Lost Sometimes
Hey! I don't really have anything constructive to point out as Ilovebubbles123 has done an awesome job on that already. I just wanted to say that I liked this. It ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: What Not To Do When You Have No Heart
Hey! My review isn't going to be very constructive I'm afraid, as the others before me have covered everything that I was going to say. I will however, tell you ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Vanish - Chapter 1
Hey Mazey! I didn't catch any grammar mistakes that others haven't already pointed out, so this review isn't going to be very constructive in that sense. The only thing that ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Freedom [Edited : 29 Jan.]
Hey Lava! So, as a thank you for reviewing my story, I thought I'd take a shot at reviewing this for you :) I didn't find anything wrong with it ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Color of Freedom
Hey! I love the title :) The orderlies always knock, as if it matters, but they come in whether she answers or not. I'd suggest re-wording this a little. Maybe ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: A Simple Crush
Hey LilySoulMahon! I've read a couple of pieces of your work on here lately, but haven't had time to review. So today, I'm going to try extra hard to give ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Lily Foxglove Chp 1 part 2
When I reached my bedroom, my eyes were on the brink of releasing floods of tears and I finally admitted to myself that I couldn’t keep this bottled up inside ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
Hey! So I saw that you were asking for more comments on this and, seeing as you did such an awesome review for me, I thought I'd try and repay ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: 14 Songs Chapter Two
Hey! This isn't going to be a very constructive review because I didn't find anything wrong with this :) I think it flowed well and it was easy to read, ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Story of Us (Part One)
Hey! So, I don't think this is awful at all! I think you conveyed the conflicting thoughts and feelings of someone in denial well :) I caught a few things ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Pieces of Time (Titles Contest Entry)
Hey megsug! I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you! So, I thought it was a nice piece. I think you portrayed the relationship between the mother ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Lily Foxglove Chp 1 Part 1
Hey! So, I first posted this on YWS almost two years ago and since then I've taken all the comments that were given to me on board and I've tried ...
Jan 23, 2011