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Hey! I think you have a cool idea for a story here :) 1. Nit-piks - shoved inside a dusty draw. 'draw' should be 'drawer' that you experienced during your ...

My favourite chocolate is Milky bar :)

8/10 I love the word 'awesome' and I wish I were a queen :)

9/10 Colourful! I wish you could actually get rainbow coloured eyes :)

Hey Butterfinger :) I'm going to take a quick look at this for you! 1. Nit-piks - Her body lay broken and bleeding on the sandy foothills; crumbled in a ...

Hey Mikko! I'll go through the nit-piks first and then I'll give my overall impression :) 1. Nit-piks - Women cried with their children clutching their sides over the dead ...

I can talk by Two door cinema club :)

9/10 - catchy song! I used hot and cold by Katy Perry to help me write a scene in my second book. Plus most of her songs make me smile ...

9/10 Cool fish :)

Hey jasmine! I loved this! It's just so true - the amount of times I've wanted to gauge my eyes out because an author has made everything so cliche, is ...

Only be able to listen to one song for the rest of my life. I can't go without music :( Umm... Would you rather only be able to write by ...

9/10 It's pretty but I haven't actually heard the song so I can't fully appreciate it :( *Heads to youtube to search song*

Hey smashles! So I saw this and wondered why it rang a bell in a far corner of my brain and then I realised that I'd reviewed the prologue :P ...

Hey! I liked this. It was a good piece for only being an experiment. Can I ask what you were experimenting with - or is it blindingly obvious and I ...

Animal by Neon Trees It makes me happy :)