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Re: The Story of Sampson P Harrison
Hey lily! I have read part one, but Azila did such an awesome job on reviewing it, that I would have just ended up writing a pointless review. I'll try ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Only a dream
Okay, so I know this is bad. I've had writers block for what seems like forever and I hoped that joining a contest with prompts would help to inspire me. ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Old
Hey Skins! I read this a couple of days ago but didn't have time to review, so I'm back now, but sadly I don't really have anything constructive to say ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Eva's Imagination
Hey Maddy! I thought this was really cute. The title drew me in and the story didn't disappoint. It was short, but then you had a word count to stick ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Country by the Sea
Hey Kafka! I haven't really got time for a very constructive review, but I just wanted to say that this was great. I didn't really understand the ending and I ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Pieces of Time
Hey Lilicia! I really liked this. Your descriptions were brilliant and didn't sound at all forced or over written. The plot was interesting and you had me hanging on every ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Jerry
Hey Elinor! I haven't been in the reviewing mood of late, but after reading this, I felt like I wanted to review again. So thanks! It was short, so we ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Hot Guys and Girls
I'm not uploading photos 'cause my laptop keeps spazzing out, but... OMG Josh Farro and Alex Gaskarth! :D
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: British Stereotypes
Haha - 'Skins' the show is set where I live. It's hilarious really as I speak just like they do in the show. I sound like a farmer *laughs at ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: The Interruption
Hey Amissa! I think you have an interesting story here. The plot itself wasn't very original - boy meets girl at a party and they hook up. But you managed ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Just Can't Get Enough
Hey Sakura! I'm back to review the second half as promised :) I haven't read what the other reviewers have said, so forgive me if I repeat anything. from the ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Together, Forever [tenative title]
Hey Chryssa! I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you :) 1. Nit-piks - Shelly sat at the kitchen table, around her the morning sun casting golden ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Just Can't Get Enough
Hey Sakura! I know you said this isn't finished but you reviewed a piece of my work so I thought I'd return the favour :) So, nit-piks first; I stood ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2
Hey Esther! I'm back again :) This was so cute! Like seriously, I'm overcome with jealously right now. If only I could write romance stories without making the reader want ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt. 1
Hey Esther! Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the humour that ran throughout the piece, both in the dialogue and narration. Your characters were all brilliant too - ...
Feb 28, 2011
