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Time to Pretend by MGMT! I was listening to that earlier - amazing song :) Uh, I'm listening to 'Lovesick' by 'Emily Osment' It's strangly addictive :P

Okay. So I posted this in general fiction short stories under the title 'Harriet' for a contest, but I've edited it since then and I'm toying with the idea of ...

I laughed until I realised that it wasn't a joke. I feel sick now :(

Hey Skins! Wow - why must you be able to write such awesome novels? *Is jealous* I can't help thinking that all of my novel ideas are sort of the ...

Hey Skins! 1. Nit-piks - grinded my teeth together 'grinded' would sound better as 'ground' the guy’s site 'site' should be 'sight' crumpled five pound not 'not' should be 'note' ...

Hey there! I thought this piece was really amazing. Relatable too. The fight to fit in has become something that almost everyone -save the ones who make the rules - ...

I was listening to 'Fluorescent adolescent' by 'Arctic monkeys' but now the CD's finished and all I can here is my sister's phone going off every other second in the ...

Hey Dreamwalker! I think this is a really interesting piece. It took me a while to get into it, because of the use of dialect, but after a while it ...

Hey there! This was so sad. Not only because the terrible disaster that struck Japan is so fresh in my mind, but because it's so true. So many people have ...

Hey Angela! I'm going to take a look at this for you :) She had been gifted with the thankless task of mopping up the slush of what seemed to ...

Hey there! I thought this piece was beautiful. The descriptions of love were nice and they felt like you were really writing them from the heart :) The piece grew ...

10/10 Pretty :)

Hey Other one! This is a review to say thanks for reading and reviewing my contest entry :) I had an urge to open my mouth and say it I ...

Hey Jenthura! I was sad to see that this had no comments, so I'm going to try my best to review it for you :) 1. Nit-piks - Every since ...

Hey there Mrs Darcy! I really liked this. I agree with the other reviewers who have said it's relatable and that's what makes it so good. You make it so ...