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Re: Liar Liar (1)
Hey there Audrey! The title of this drew me in - it reminded me of the film of the same name :) So, I didn't spot that many grammatical mistakes, ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter three
Again, so much thanks goes out to everyone who has either read or commented on the first two chapters - I really appreciate the support! Not a lot happens in ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: How Paul became yellow
Hey Crafty! I'm gonnna go ahead and call you that, okay? :) So, I was thinking about entering this contest, but I haven't been able to think up anything to ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Second Chance - Chapter One
Hey BrooklynWriter! I really enjoyed reading this. I have a feeling I know where this might be heading, but the way you write has me wanting to read on, despite ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: The End
Hey VousEsEtonnant! I'm here as requested. I would have posted it sooner, but YWS suddenly stopped working on me and then it crashed and only saved the first part of ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: The Other Reviewer. :)
Hey Otherone! You've given me great reviews in the past and I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at the first chapter of my new romance novel ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
8/10 Doctor Who is awesome :)
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: 'Just Go With It' Review (2011)
Hey! I loved this film too! I saw it a couple of weeks back and I can say it's the funniest film I've seen in a while. This review was ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Hey Azila! I've seen some of your awesome reviews around the forums and I'd really appreciate it if you could look at something for me. It's called 'Sometimes' and it's ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Hey there! I've seen some of your reviews around the forums and I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at something for me. It's called 'Sometimes' and ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
9/10 True :)
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Death
Hey Teardrop! I saw that this was featured - congrats on that - so I'm here to review this for you :) I did notice a few nit-piks, so I'm ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Love gone wrong
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I think you have a good basis for a story here but I did notice a few things that were wrong grammatically. The feelings were ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter two
So thank you to everyone who either read or commented on chapter one! I'm really starting to like writing this story so I'd really appreciate any feedback at all - ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Sunday
Hey Otherone! I wondered if this was based on the song when I saw the title. I'm so glad it is as I absolutely love the song - I've used ...
Mar 20, 2011