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Re: Tangled Affection
Hey there Anime - I'm gonna go ahead and shorten your name for you :P I suddenly remembered that you'd reviewed my contest entry for me, so I thought I'd ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Cam's Entry for Jas' Prompt Contest
Hey Cam! I've entered this contest too, so I thought I'd check out your entry to see what I'm up against ;) I like what you have here. It's a ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: As Gold as Donny
Hey Lena! I don't really have anything constructive to say. I just thought I'd read this as it was written by you, and I enjoyed the last piece of yours ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Sinews
Hey! Thanks for requesting me to review this and honestly, it's my pleasure. I'm flattered that you think I'm talented, but truthfully, it's you my friend, that are talented. Even ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter four
I honestly can't thank you enough if you've reviewed or read any part of this novel. I'm finally getting into the swing of writing it and I'm actually enjoying writing ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: The Coward's Way Out
Okay, I'm a sucker for your writing. I couldn't not click on this, could I? ;) So, I enjoyed reading this. It kept me on edge throughout - I didn't ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 9)
Hey Skins! I'm back again :) As usual, I really enjoyed reading this. I liked how Charlie finally stood up for himself, but instead of it being all heroic, we ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 8)
Hey Skins! One of the first things I did when I came back on here today was to check whether you'd posted anymore of Stop and Stare and I was ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: April Featured Member: xDudettex!
Thanks so much everyone! I really wasn't expecting this one bit :D
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Ready: Into the Shadows.
Hey there! I did take a quick glance at the other reviews but I'm sorry if I repeat anything. I really enjoyed reading this. The subject matter is sad and ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: You Don't Love Me
Hey there! I agree with the other reviews that some of the dialogue seems a bit forced and awkward. If she really loved him, even though he doesn't love her, ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The Promise
Hey IcyFlame! I thought this was so sad. It was full of emotion and you did a good job of getting me to sympathise with the boy. I just wanted ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: The Drive-Thru Diaries
Hey Teddy! I didn't catch any mistakes, but then I mostly skim read this as I'm supposed to be packing my room up, instead of on YWS :P I think ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 7)
Hey Skins! I'm finally here to review this for you :) First off, I agree with Ranger Hawk in that I like this much better than them meeting at school. ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Alex
Hey there! This is pretty short, but I liked it. I would suggest that you up the rating though, for your use of a swear word. I did find some ...
Mar 24, 2011
