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Hey there! I liked this. It was a good piece, full of emotion. But I would like more background. I feel as though, at the moment, I can't sympathise with ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have an awesome time here :) Now, onto the review. I don't have much to say that hasn't already been said. I ...

Hey there! I agree with the other reviewers in that this is good, for a start, but it could be so much better. The way you describe the emotions are ...

Hey Ranger! I liked the ending - it was nice to see Mud, er, Arianna, get some good fortune. She seemed like a nice enough person, if supposedly ugly and ...

Hey there! I enjoyed reading this. It was sad - the fact that he'd been in an accident and might die before proposing to Annette, but the ending made me ...

Once again, I love all of you who have taken the time to help me by reviewing or reading this novel. I appreciate the support and I really need it ...

Hey Lilicia! I enjoyed reading this. The title caught my attention straight away and I couldn't help clicking to have a read. You do a good job of setting the ...

Hey Skins! I had my eagle eyes searching for typos throughout this, but I kept getting distracted by the story. It's just so darn good. I loved the whole thing ...

Hey there! I think this was a great little story. I liked the way you didn't bow down to stereotypes - you completely changed everything around character-wise, but you still ...

Hey there! As a lot of the other reviewers have already pointed out, I appreciate the humour in this :) It's nice to read a vampire story that isn't oh ...

Hey Hayden! I think this was a wonderful story! Like others have said, the grammar was great and I couldn't find any typos at all, so well done you. I ...

Hey Lena! Thanks for the PM - I'm happy to review anything of yours anytime :) Sorry I'm only just getting to reviewing this - I've had a crappy internet ...

Hey Elinor! I enjoyed reading this, but I do agree with little tin fish. You seem to have captured the story more in first person than in second, which is ...

So. I am aware that the plot sucks a little, but that wasn't the reason why I wrote this. It was actually inspired by a conversation about dialects that Azila ...

Hey Skinsy! The Master of Typos is here ;) I read this a couple of days ago but didn't have time to review - not that you'd have noticed, with ...