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Re: 'Cause when you're sixteen (Part Three)
Hey Catri! I'm glad you've started posting this story again. It's been ages since I read and reviewed the first parts! Now, the nit-piks have already been pointed out, so ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter six
Thanks to everyone who's supported this so far - it means so much :D Now, for a re-cap. In the last chapter, Cassie and Aiden both called Harriet serious, much ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Summer Will Suck.
Hey anime! I am soo jealous of you right now. I am nowhere near starting my story for this contest. In fact, I barely have a plot... But anyway, as ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Bruises
Hey there! First off, I know how you feel. Most of the time I feel like I'm stuck between a rock and a hard place. I constantly feel like I'm ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 12)
Hey there Skins! I wasn't going to review anything today, 'cause I'm feeling lazy :P But then I saw this and got really exited because I wanted to know what ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Glitter
Hey there! A delayed welcome to YWS is in order :) I hope you have an amazing time on this website! Now, as for a review, I don't think I ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
Hey there! I saw that this was featured so I thought I'd take a gander. And I'm glad I did. Like others have said in previous reviews, this is so ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Your hug
Hey there! I'm almost never in the poetry forums because I'm shocking at writing poems. They never seem to rhyme properly and they're always awkwardly worded. But, for a fellow ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Another Gaze
Hey Otherone! I only just spotted this today. If I'd have noticed it before then I would have gotten to it a lot sooner. So. I liked this. It was ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!
Hey there! I definitely agree with the other reviewers in that this has potential but it just needs to be fleshed out a little more. I want to know more ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Meant to Be (part 2 of 3)
Hey again! I'm back to review this part for you. I read it yesterday but didn't have time to review, and it seems that Lilicia has beat me to it ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Red Door (Seasame Sleep)
Hey there! I agree with anger. It was a great story, but at times I found myself wondering what was going on. That may have been your intention, but I ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Meant to Be (part 1 of 3)
Hey there! As a start to a story, this isn't too bad. It's left me with lots of unanswered questions, which is good I guess, as it makes me want ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The UnBible: The New Testament: The Book of Luke
Hey there! I thought I'd take a look at this for you, seeing as you reviewed something of mine. Now, I'm not at all up to scratch when it comes ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Winterland.
Hey Jas! There's not much left for me to say that's very constructive, seeing as a lot of other reviewers have given great reviews, so I'm just going to highlight ...
May 4, 2011
