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Re: Parallel chapter 1
Hey there! Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. Now, this wasn't a bad piece of writing - you had a plot and two characters that you ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Applebeans
Hey Azila! It's so nice to read something of yours. I have to say, you write just as well as you review. Maybe even better, if that's possible ;) This ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Nationality Headcount at YWS
American: 27 Canadian: 6 English: 14 Filipino: 6 Finnish: 2 French: 2 Indian: 6 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1 South Korean: 1 Welsh: ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 13)
Hey there Skins! I'm so glad you posted another part - I feel like I'm addicted to this story :P So, I'm going to try my best to give you ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: She Knows Him
Hey there emmy! I think this was great. I didn't spot any mistakes, so good job! I do have one suggestion though - He can do a handstand. 'a handstand' ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Perfect Day
Hey there! I agree with everything that the other reviews have said. This was so simple, sweet and utterly adorable. I loved it! The only thing I'd have to suggest ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Heartbreak
Hey there! I think this piece has real potential. The feelings you described were great - I could really imagine how the girl was feeling. On the down side though, ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Things
Hey there! I think you have a good piece here. It was grammatically sound and flowed well, keeping me engaged the whole way through. The descriptions you used were great ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: stranded
Hey there! I think this story does have some potential - you began to build up some great tension and I could sense how worried the MC (main character) was, ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Autobiography 1.2
Hey Lena! Thanks for the PM. So, once again, I enjoyed reading this. I love the fact that it's written using dialect - I can really imagine the chacrater's talking ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Inspiration and Writer's Block
Hey there anime! I'm sad to say that these pieces are so true. I'm not sad that you wrote them well - congrats on that! - it's just that I ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Nine O'Clock
Hey there! First off, I have to say that I love your avvie; Paramore is one of my favourite bands :) That aside, I loved this story. The concept was ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: carbonCore's reviewRequests
Hey cC! So, I have a question for you... I had to write a piece in the genre of magical realist for Azila's writers roulette contest and to be honest, ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Burning up (Second edit)
Okay. So I had so much trouble coming up with a plot for this. The final plot was inspired by a song called 'Burning up' by an awesome British band ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: A breath of fresh air
Hey there! This was a great read. You wrote in the present tense well and as a consequence the piece flowed well. I don't really have anything fresh to say, ...
May 9, 2011
