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Hey there! I think this story has potential - it just needs fleshing out a bit. At the moment, we get a good sense of the MC at the start ...

Okay, so my word was 'Father' but I thought of 'Music.' Probably because my dad has a huge CD collection and introduced me to some awesome bands. This story is ...

Hey there, Italy! I think this was smartly done. It was an interesting format having the letters and then the piece at the end, detailing the girl running away/leaving her ...

Hey there! I clicked on this because it has the same title as a song I love by the Temper Trap. That aside though, I think this has potential. You ...

Hey silent! Here as requested :) So, I think this is my favourite story that I've read by you. It was a really great story and, for something that's sci-fi, ...

Hey there! I think you did a wonderful job on this. You write with such an ease that it makes it a joy to read. None of it comes across ...

Hey Jas! I think this is a great piece. The descriptions were great and, for someone who's never been to NYC, you did a good job of giving me great ...

Hey again silent! I think this version is better for giving us a deeper insight into the character's life. We now know more about why she's thinking about leaving her ...

Hey there silentpages! I think you followed the prompts well. Each character's part was written well and you wrote them in a way that made them sound different fom each ...

Hey there! I think this was a pretty good short story. It flowed nicely and your descriptions were really great too, giving way to beautiful imagery. I could imagine the ...

Hey there Skins! I would have posted sooner, if I'd have known you'd posted this, but I seem to be reviewing less and less these days so I rarely search ...

Me again! Just dropping back in to say I think the added information about her previous killings is good. It's not much, but it really helps to give us an ...

Hey there tydecker! Thanks for requesting my help :) So, first off I have to say how jealous I am that you've come up with a wonderful entry already. I ...

Hey there silentpages :) As the other reviewers before me have said, I think you've done a good job on this. It flowed well and I didn't spot any grammatical ...

As usual, I want to start off by saying how much I love the people who are reviewing and reading this story. I honestly can't express how much I appreciate ...