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Hey there! I agree with the reviewer above in that we don't know anything about the MC or the guy that she's just split up with. All we know is ...

Hey there! I think this was brillaint. I was a little confused at first, but as I read on I started to understand what was meant by the title of ...

Hey there Icy! The title drew me in straight away. As for your MC, she was okay. A bit too plain at some points, but as Waywardbird said, it was ...

Hey there! I myself didn't go to university, so I never had the pleasure of filling out forms and applications. I have friends who did though and this poem of ...

Hey there! I'll be the first to admit that I'm not very good when it comes to reviewing poetry, but I'm using the 'shuffle' button today and this popped up. ...

Hey there! I know you said that this isn't finished yet, but even so I think it's great. I love The Pretty Reckless, so I tried imagining it as one ...

Hey there littletinfish! I read part one just now, but you already had some great reviews so I thought I'd have a go at reviewing this part for you :) ...

Hey! I don't have time for a very indepth review, but I wanted to point out the time inwhich your story is set. You write the dates 1987 throughout, yet ...

Hey there thatoddkid! As always, as with all of your writing, I enjoyed this. Your grammar was great and the piece flowed with such ease that it really was a ...

Hey there Smurf! I got all excited when I saw you'd posted this :P *Has no life evidently* But this story is sooo good :) I knew I wasn’t sharpest ...

Hey there! I think you have a pretty sad piece here. The nit-piks I were going to mention have already been caught, but I still wanted to point this out ...

Hey there! Thanks for clicking on my contest entry :) The contest I entered can be found here - My emotion was 'Rage' and I picked the song 'The A ...

Hey Jaymee! I think this piece was good. Your descriptions were nice and they really helped to express to the reader how scared the MC was, even though it all ...

Hey there! So I know I only posted chapter nine on Sunday, but I really want to know what you guys think of this part. I think things start to ...

Hey there UV! I read the original version of this earlier today, and I can really see the improvements you've made to the piece after reading this version too. I ...