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Brandon! I'm here :) So, I see what you meant when you said you had a really different theme to mine ;) I think you did a good job of ...

Hey there Amelia! Great job on this. It flowed well, and I really think you captured the emotions you expressed, well. The ending made me shiver. It's so true that ...

Hey Lileh! This was so sweet. The part about the barn being on fire made me sad though. Poor Travis :( “Wow, Daddy, can I have a pig,” Gabby exclaimed. ...

Hey! Thanks for choosing to read this. I have a feeling I'm going to need a lot of help with improving it. This piece is for the 150 word contest. ...

Hey there otherone! I don't really have time for a proper review, but I thought I'd comment anyway. This piece seems a lot better than the one you wrote before. ...

Smurfy! You shouldn't apologise for posting more of this. You're helping to feed my addiction! been limp of meaning. I can't decide whether 'been of limp meaning' would sound better ...

Hey PrincessOfDarkness! I'm glad you posted this. I enjoyed reading it :) So, I don't know if you want any nit-piks or not, seeing as you wrote this a while ...

Smurf! I really don't know why you're so worried about this. You need to stop being so paranoid and start believing in yourself. *Said in a Mum style voice* :P ...

Hey again! Thanks for choosing to read this. I really do appreciate all of the help and support that I've recieved from you awesome people :) Not much happens in ...

Hey Tinny! Thanks for letting me know this was posted :) I have to agree with Charlie in that this story really has caught my attention. I'm really enjoying the ...

Smurf! I'm glad you decided to post this early :) that I was, I did exactly the same in response. This would be better without the second 'I' climbing up ...

Hey otherone! I'm always happy to read and review a piece of your writing, especially since you always do such an awesome job on reviewing my work :) So, nit-piks ...

Hey there! I didn’t understand. I was ... I was on my street! How? Somehow, nothing made sense. Everything seemed unrealistic and blurry. I looked at the scene around me. ...

Smurf! I love you for posting this part. I've had a bit of a crappy day today, but seeing this up made me smile, so thanks :) being tucked in ...

I was either eleven or twelve when I started writing my first novel - it was about a group of four friends and a bunch of rumours and secrets. I've ...