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Hey Smurf! I hope you're having fun on holiday with no YWS :P Anyway, I'm here for a review, obviously. I mean, I'm not here to ask for fish and ...

Goo's here as promised, Smurf! Firstly, I agree with the points that Tanya raised, about Charlie bringing Austin to the cliff. You didn't mention before that they hung out there. ...

Hey there! Thanks again to everyone that's been following this. It means so much to me to know that you guys want to read what I've written :) I haven't ...

Hey! So this is my second entry to the 150 word contest. My first entry can be found here - The theme I had was 'justifying revenge.' I don't know ...

Smurf! Goo here as promised :) I scanned the rest of the race to check that Luke hadn’t shoved any other fictional books into the wrong place Scanned the rest ...

Hey there! In the last chapter, Harriet had an awkward conversation with Brandon, before helping Leanne sort her clothes and convince LZ magazine to come to their gig. Oh, and ...

Hey Yoda! I think this was pretty developed for a story of only 250 words or less. You had dialogue, and a setting, and some characters (duh), but I felt ...

Hey thatoddkid! You know I love the way you write with such ease. It makes your stories such a joy to read, even when they're about something negative. You're always ...

Hey PrincessOfDarkness! I read this the other day and was going to review but didn't have the time. I came back, all ready with my points, but it looks like ...

Hey there Forestqueen! For a pretty basic plot; girl writes letter to boy to tell him she's finally moved on and that she's stronger without him. And a pretty short ...

Hey there! Nice idea for a story you have here :) I agree with Elinor though, in that this could be so much more. It's way to telly, and I ...

Back again! This seems longer... Have you added more lines? If not, it was probably just that I first read this with my eyes half shut. Anyway, I like that ...

Hey Brandon! This piece is certainly different to your other entry, but I liked it. The change in styles was good and, like TheBlackSheep said, the whole piece held my ...

Yo, Smurf! I've just watched Battle Los Angeles, so all I can hear in my head is gun shots and explosions. But I'll try to ignore that and stay focused ...

Me again. I appreciate the help that all of you lovely people have been giving me so far, and I'd love to know what you think of this chapter too. ...