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Hey there Confetti! I think this piece is brilliant. I'm not sure what the prompt you were given was, but this piece is great all the same. For the first ...

Smurf! You do know that you writing something like this doesn't surprise me at all. I mean, it's full of death and sadness and anger and insanity and depressing thoughts. ...

Hey hey! I'm sorry the last chapter was lacking in Aiden and Sonny, but this chapter has both of them, so that makes up for it :P In the last ...

Hey there! I liked this piece. It was a challenge to write something from the point of view of a lion who doesn't eat meat. You gave him human traits, ...

Hey there! I noticed that you reviewed some of the earlier chapters of my novel, so I thought I'd return the favour. This isn't a bad start to a novel, ...

Hey Oddkid! You know I love this story, right? It's brilliant and mesmerising and I seriously can't stop wishing that chapter had been longer. But I agree with the others ...

Hey there! You have an interesting start to a novel here. Your main character is saving herself for real love, for a her perfect guy. It's a nice thought but, ...

Hey there! I think this is a good twist on the original. You seemed to hit your idea for a theme on the head too. Now, I'm no good at ...

Hey, hey! I'm so excited that all of my awesome novel followers wanted me to post this part so soon after the last chapter. It makes me feel special :P ...

I only went to see the film 'Chalet girl,' because Ed Westwick stars in it :P But the soundtrack was really good with the likes of 'The Wombats', 'Two door ...

Hey classy :) I really liked this. It was easy to read and well put together. I was able to picture the scenes well and it helped to make the ...

Hey, hey! Sorry for not posting for a while. I had a brief falling out with the novel again, but thankfully I'm back to writing and editing. This chapter's a ...

Smurf! skin as I tired my hardest not to 'tried' Dang, yeah! He's expressing relief and joy here, right? But I always associate 'dang' with being negative, so it doesn't ...

Hey there thatoddkid! I enjoyed this part just as much as the first. You write with such ease that it makes me jealous to think that you're only 15 whereas ...

Yesterday, I saw big purple elephants eating my house. They sucked out my book shelves and ate my Oscar Wilde collection. And the Foxtrot comic book that was drenched in ...