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Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
8/10 It's cool and original and it made me think how long ago it was that I did a jigsaw puzzle. Answer - ages ago.
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: What is the member above you known for? [2]
For having the second cutest avatar ever :)
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: This is My Cup.
Hey there! but its hard to be optimistic The only nit-pik that I think didn't get caught is this - 'its' should be 'it ' s' Okay, so this was ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Forbidden
Hey there! I really liked this. The twist at the end was good, although I was mad and sad that Lily betrayed Arthur. I mean, she knew he was going ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Techno Fan (New version)
I originally posted this story for a contest way back in May, but since then I've tried to improve it and have decided to enter it into the 'Bring on ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Birthday twins
August 12th I share with Calligraphy and Nyx :D
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Do you write every day?
Sadly, no. But I'd love to be able to.
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Dead Broke -- Chapter 3
Hey there! I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. I mean after you were so gracious as to let me spend the night Comma after ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Earthquake
Hey there! Why am I falling and no one else is? I loved the imagery here. It really was great. I think, however, this sentence could be better. Maybe if ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: If You Lied
Hey there! This had me reading till the end, which is good. My concentration didn't waver and I didn't find myself wanting to skip parts, so well done there. I ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Skeleton Girl
Hey there! I haven't reviewed in a good while, so I apologise if this review isn't very helpful. I only skimmed the other's comments, so I'm sorry if I repeat ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Eighteen
I'm so so sorry to everyone who's been waiting on this for the last month. Writing's been pushed to the back of my mind at the moment, and so has ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Death in a paper roll.
Hey Kagi! I so agree with this. I work in my parent's Off licence and we sell cigarettes. It's surprising the amount some people get through. I mean, one man ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: The Gift of Christmas
Hey there Kitty! So I'm guessing, and forgive me if I'm wrong, that the theme of your piece is supposed to be something along the lines of generosity. Not where ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Little Fleas
Hey there, Twit! I liked this. It's hard to write something that manages to tell a story and catch the reader's attention when you only have a small word limit, ...
Aug 30, 2011
