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  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]

    8/10 It's cool and original and it made me think how long ago it was that I did a jigsaw puzzle. Answer - ages ago.

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What is the member above you known for? [2]

    For having the second cutest avatar ever :)

    Oct 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: This is My Cup.

    Hey there! but its hard to be optimistic The only nit-pik that I think didn't get caught is this - 'its' should be 'it ' s' Okay, so this was ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Forbidden

    Hey there! I really liked this. The twist at the end was good, although I was mad and sad that Lily betrayed Arthur. I mean, she knew he was going ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Techno Fan (New version)

    I originally posted this story for a contest way back in May, but since then I've tried to improve it and have decided to enter it into the 'Bring on ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Birthday twins

    August 12th I share with Calligraphy and Nyx :D

    Oct 3, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Do you write every day?

    Sadly, no. But I'd love to be able to.

    Oct 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Dead Broke -- Chapter 3

    Hey there! I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. I mean after you were so gracious as to let me spend the night Comma after ...

    Oct 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Earthquake

    Hey there! Why am I falling and no one else is? I loved the imagery here. It really was great. I think, however, this sentence could be better. Maybe if ...

    Oct 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: If You Lied

    Hey there! This had me reading till the end, which is good. My concentration didn't waver and I didn't find myself wanting to skip parts, so well done there. I ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Skeleton Girl

    Hey there! I haven't reviewed in a good while, so I apologise if this review isn't very helpful. I only skimmed the other's comments, so I'm sorry if I repeat ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sometimes, chapter Eighteen

    I'm so so sorry to everyone who's been waiting on this for the last month. Writing's been pushed to the back of my mind at the moment, and so has ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Death in a paper roll.

    Hey Kagi! I so agree with this. I work in my parent's Off licence and we sell cigarettes. It's surprising the amount some people get through. I mean, one man ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Gift of Christmas

    Hey there Kitty! So I'm guessing, and forgive me if I'm wrong, that the theme of your piece is supposed to be something along the lines of generosity. Not where ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Little Fleas

    Hey there, Twit! I liked this. It's hard to write something that manages to tell a story and catch the reader's attention when you only have a small word limit, ...

    Aug 30, 2011


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