xDudettex

I'm back again! Nit-piks first. He could hear the heavy foot steps as his pursuers gained. 'foot steps' is one word. Turning sharply down an ally Ares zig zagged between ...

Hey again Dragongirl! I'm back for more. So I'm still enjoying this story. Ares is a great character and I loved how you gave us a brief description of him ...

Hey there Sakura! I don't normally enter the poetry forums, mainly because I suck at writing them, but seeing as you always comment on my novel, I thought I'd take ...

Hey there Stella! So I think the reviewers before me have already done an awesome job of mentioning all of the things that I was going to point out, and ...

Banned for caring about people's health

For being easy to talk to and an awesome reviewer :)

Bubbles

Hey there Dragongirl! Seeing as you were nice enough to read my novel, I thought I'd drop by here and see what I could do to help. First off, I ...

Hey there! I'm guessing that, from your custom title and name, you're a Fall Out Boy fan? *High fives* They're awesome :) On to the review. There sure is a ...

Accidently spit on my crush. He'd get over it. Right? Would you rather bathe in baked beans for a year, or put lemon juice in your eyes every day for ...

Playing God - Paramore What was the point in that?

L Luna Lovegood - Harry Potter.

7/10 - only if it's chicken.

You need me, I don't need you - Ed Sheeran

9/10 - cute.