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Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-one
Hey guys! If you're still reading this, then I seriously love you. If it weren't for all of the super nice feedback that I've been getting, then I don't think ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Flashbacks
Hey there Confetti! I like the idea of this. It's a well known fact that people who have been to war usually come back a different person. It can stay ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
Halloween bunny?! 10/10
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: The Lucky Ones
Hey Walker! So, I'm not going to pretend to know what this is actually about, but I'm going to tell you that I liked it. In my head, it was ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Ad Infinitum (first 5.8k words, tentative title)
The MC's voice confused me at first. The way he spoke wasn't straight forward and some times it took me a couple of goes to understand what he was saying, ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Airplane lines
Hey there! I think this was quite cute. I'd never really thought too much about the lines in the sky made by the airplanes before, but now I can see ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Nothing
Hey there KoWolfie! Welcome to YWS! I'm going to try my best to review this for you. So, first impressions. This isn't bad. It's a little vague at times, and ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Sportsmanship
Hey there Mistie! The writing itself is good. I didn't spot any grammatical errors apart from these here - āIām fine.ā She nodded, bobbing her dull red curls. 'nodded' should ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: My Heart Tightens
Hey there Hollow! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here :) As for a review, I'll try and be as helpful as I can. Sargsauce has ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
Naturally - Selena Gomez and The Scene Who rules the world?
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
I wanna be a Rockstar - Nickelback. What's the best thing in life?
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
9/10 To the novel part - that's exactly how I respond when my mum asks me what I'm writing :P
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
Food
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty
Yo! So, there's been a lack of Sonny lately, but he's back in this part. And, hang on, is that a moment I see brewing...? In the last chapter; Cassie ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
Pink.
Oct 15, 2011
