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Re: The singing game
Under a paper moon - All Time Low Where did you go?
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
Square
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Beauty's Beholder
Hey Ayla! I have to agree with the other reviewers and say that you have wonderful imagery in this piece. You have just enough subtlety in this piece to make ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-four
Yo! I'm so sorry I've made you all wait a week longer than usual. Life has been blah lately, but I'm here now, ready to leave you on another cliff-hanger ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Would You Like a Cookie?
Hey there Alex! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have an awesome time here :) When it comes to your story, I really enjoyed it. I guessed that the sisters ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Your Green Hoodie
Hey there creativityrules! Gosh. This was so darn cute! I mean, aww :D I love it. You seem to capture the MC's feelings beautifully, with her thoughts and the way ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Hero (temporary: any ideas)
Hey Writer97! Thanks for requesting a review! I don't have much time right now, and the piece is pretty long anyway, but I'll give you some of my thoughts. All ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: to be a Princess
Hey there Cailey! This story was so lovely. The way you wrote it allowed me to paint the scenes beautifully and the whole piece flowed nicely. It was easy to ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: A Story in Black and White
Hey Walker! You know I love your writing, eh? I mean, it was so sad! At first I thought the girl he was describing was a small child. I thought ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Liar
Hey there mistie! I don't have time for a proper review - my tea's almost ready - but I just wanted to give you some quick advice. Slow it down. ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: The Blue Dress
Hey there! Can I just say how great your imagery was? I mean, the whole thing with the sun and the red river. Lovely! I liked how part one and ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Taboo {2}
Hey Pink! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. I promise I didn't forget. Life just got in the way a bit. I haven't reviewed for a ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-three
Yo! The romance is coming people :P In the last chapter; Harriet pestered Leanne about her secret crush and Aiden and Harriet had a moment at dance practise. Enjoy! I ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-two
Hey hey! The usual thanks go out to my readers. You guys are my inspiration! In the last chapter - Harriet found out that Cassie can't go to the gig ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Give and Take
Hey Walker! I really do think you have a talent for telling a story without dialogue. I can't wait to read your nano novel if you post :) You're great ...
Oct 24, 2011