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To be honest, this just bored me. No offense, but the whole song is a cliche, what you hear all the time when someone is in love with someone else. ...

I know it's not that good, read and criticize :smt003 Remembering that fateful evening, surrounded by perfect, flawless people, while the black candle flames dance past my distracted line of ...

Wow, this was really good! I don't think it needs to be improved, you put your real feelings into it, and it actually made me almost cry, because I can ...

I wrote this about my best friend... I rated it 16+ even though I'm only 15, because it talks about suicide, and I don't want anyone to get offended or ...

I think this is a worn out topic, and cliche. Also, some of the things you said sound really awkward, like While tears stream as I cry boo hoo 'Boo ...

It had nothing to do with Snow White, I wasn't even thinking about that when I wrote it o_o and thanks everyone :D

The form is right actually. In my class the first thing we learned about sestinas is that the form to the words can be changed as long as the root ...

It's another sestina I wrote for my writing class. ___________________________________________________ I pray to the nightfall to take my hand as I descend, And the sky fills with rain. Enwreathed in ...

This is an allegorical poem I wrote about attempted and failed suicide. As you dream, you see a small, bright crimson sphere against a white background of dull, pale pallor. ...

I think this poem is only filled with cliches and it has no real meaning. The rhyming sounds forced, like when it says Can you properly eat? And don't wiggle ...

This is a good poem, I like how original the formatting is. The only thing that stuck out to me was the part when it says 'flip the switch', I ...

I really like the first one and the last. Good job! I've used charcoal in my art class, and I'm pretty horrible at it xD And it can be erased ...

I'm horrible with names, so if you know anything that would be a better name for this, tell me :wink: When contrary winds blow across the sands, their murmurs can ...

I really enjoyed your work, and admire your views of both agony and irony. It reminds me very much of the song "unhearted" by Automatic Loveletter, "I sit in the ...

I'm 14, not 11... but thanks.