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This piece honestly does nothing for the reader. First of all, you should never call your work Untitled. Secondly, it's obvious that you wrote this within a time frame of ...

I see you there, as they tense for warfare. Standing there, with your innocent stare. Is this what you call it, that God is glorifying? Here we are now, between ...

Hi, I really liked this. The imagery was good; and it's one of those poems that make me happy from reading it. :) The only thing that needs to be ...

I posted the next scene.

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I really liked this poem, and your structure was interesting. :smt002 But there are some mistakes that should be fixed. Who are you? Who am I? All around me there ...

Also, may I ask what you mean by "white background" it seemed important to the poem but I dont really get what you meant by it. It stood for the ...

This is also about Elizabeth Bathory... I was being greatly inspired by my favorite band. The quotes in italics are from songs, I didn't write them. But everything else, I ...

Thanks :)

To me this poem seems sloppy. Some parts of it rhyme, and some don't. The stanzas are different lengths. Also, I thought I new you, 'New' should be spelled 'knew'. ...

I wrote this two act play in my Creative Writing class, so I thought I'd post it on here. It starts out really weird and random, but I really don't ...

I loved the way you wrote this, how it seems playful, like a child really wrote it. I can't really think of any way you could improve it, because I ...

I liked the topic of this poem. And I liked the way the way you wrote it, too. There are some parts that I think could be better though. Also, ...

My user name isn't odd, it's the abbreviation for my favorite band Cradle of Filth xD

I remember being trapped in the dark. I remember having no emotion as I f e l l back into my lonely abyss. I remember b r e a k ...