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Ha, ha.... 8/10

I stood just waiting, waiting like I did in the lunch line for a ham and cheese, God I wish I had a ham and cheese sandwich right now.

Ya the reason its hard to pronounce is because its an acronym for What Would Jesus Not Do... So yeah... Jonathan

I wonder if the thongs were new, or if they stole those too...

6/10... Martians have to be green it wouldn't be right if they weren't My name is Jesus... I will eat your soul!

YaY I win... guess what I look like

Um I dunno your a brunnette and also half blind?

Probably a turtle.

I'd probably move to Canada... What would you do if you fell asleep and when you woke up you were in a coffin?

four foot nine inches... red hair... no freckles.... I dunno

3 out of ten... I don't like cats

Yeah this was very powerful. I liked how you kept it brief, I think it created a more realistic setting because you kept it brief. Um whatever happened to her ...

Your writing is fantastic. I liked how you kept useless descriptors to a minimum, definitely a sign of a mature writer. I have friends that are just like the characters ...

Wow, your writing is very inticing... great imagery... The only critical response i can think of is that you omit the last sentence... it just seemed out of place to ...

Hi Mel... I'm Jon, I just joined this site too... it seems pretty sweet... but yeah So far everybody's been really cool so yeah.