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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Adoption

    This is a really great poem. You put a lot of emotion in it. And I could feel that too. It's always a wonderful feeling when you are touched by ...

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Late Autumn

    Wow..just wow. I could really feel everything that you were saying. Like I could feel the sun's rays and hear the dog panting. You definatly have some potential in being ...

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Our Moon

    This short story is soo good. You made it very detailed and you don't see a lot like that anymore. It kept my attention and I really enjoyed reading it. ...

    Oct 17, 2011


“A good book isn't written, it's rewritten.”
— Phyllis A. Whitney, Guide to Fiction Writing