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Re: Mind Trip
It would be really helpful if people gave me some feedback...I'm definatly iffy about this one
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Re: Mind Trip
I looked at my cereal, then pushed it away. I wasn’t in the mood to eat, let alone go to school, but luckily it was the end of the week, ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Mind Trip
I looked at my cereal, then pushed it away. I wasn’t in the mood to eat, let alone go to school, but luckily it was the end of the week, ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Delete, please.
This was absoloutly AMAZING!!!:) It took me to a whole different atmosphere and it was super fun to read. It's just wow. It was upsetting that it was so short ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: The Paladins of the Arcane, Chapter 1
The title of this book was what caught my attention, and WOW this was soo good. It left me speechless and now I'm literally begging for more. There's soo many ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: By the Red Fence (Prolouge)
Okay first off, the title is what caught me right away, then you blew me away with the rest. It started off strong and interesting and stayed that way throughout ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Don't Speak: Chapter One
Wow, this is a very well written story. Can't wait to read more. You were very detailed and I would say something about a quote, but I don't know how ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: their cries
This was an AMAZING poem. I too just started the section on slavery and it's just terrible what happened to them. And you could feel that emotion in this poem. ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Adoption
This is a really great poem. You put a lot of emotion in it. And I could feel that too. It's always a wonderful feeling when you are touched by ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Late Autumn
Wow..just wow. I could really feel everything that you were saying. Like I could feel the sun's rays and hear the dog panting. You definatly have some potential in being ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Our Moon
This short story is soo good. You made it very detailed and you don't see a lot like that anymore. It kept my attention and I really enjoyed reading it. ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Mind's Eye
I live here in this tiny house, way out in the middle of nowhere. Of course there are farms all around, including ours, and we still have our little small ...
Oct 15, 2011
