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Re: Prologue and Chapter 1 part 1
This is a good story that you have going right now. Looking forward to reading more by you. It's very exciting and fun. Extremely enjoyable to read. You have quite ...
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Re: Seed Chapter 2 Part 2
This is a good story that you have going right now. Looking forward to reading more by you. It's very exciting and fun. Extremely enjoyable to read. You have quite ...
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Re: ES+GP (prolog)
This is a good story that you have going right now. Looking forward to reading more by you. It's very exciting and fun. Extremely enjoyable to read. You have quite ...
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Re: Dear Mr. President
You never really notice how screwed up your life is until you take a minute to really see what’s in front of you. The same old boring routine you have ...
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Re: Pinch Me Chpt. Two
This is a really good story you have going so far. I have so many questions left in my head, waiting to be answered. You really have an act for ...
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Re: Fate and Choice- Introduction: Retrospect
This was a really great story and it was very enjoyable to read. Keep it up! :) I like the type of books like this and you definatly left me ...
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Re: Silent Secrets Chapter 4 ( Caged)
Wow, this is a really intriguing(?) story. I like the way you wrote it, my favorite books like Crank are like this. You have a real act for writing and ...
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Re: Mind's Eye Chapter 2
I quickly dried my hands and picked up the phone, “Hello?” “Hey, sorry. I know you probably hate me, but I wanted to know if you wanted to hang out ...
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Re: Then Came the Fall. Chapter 5.
Wow, you are an amazing writer. I just read the whole thing for the first time and I was blown away. I definatly will be reading more of this book, ...
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Re: Short Poems #1
I really didn't know what you meant by "short," but you covered it. These are all really good either way, though. In my opinion because you're actually pretty good. If ...
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Re: The Reason for Rain: Chapter One
hello, I am fifteen also, and not too good at writing. But this was actually really good. I did notice some spelling and gramatical errors, but other than that it ...
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Re: Infractus Iudicium: Part One
This is a very interesting thing you have going here. You're a very good writer. It's amazing how well this was thought out and everything. You surely do have and ...
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Re: One In The Mirror
Wow, this is a super good poem. I'm definatly reading a lot more by you. I don't have anything against it. So, just keep doing what you do. :)
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Re: The Lost Embrace
There's only one problem in this whole entire poem and I would have to say it is the "cuz" it ruins the educated and sophisticated thing of the poem. Other ...
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Re: How to Create a Novel
I can't find that blue bar that's usually there. Is there possibly another way to submit my novel?
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