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Thanks for the great advice! I'll deffinetley shorten the paragraphs next time. And if anyone does want to know more about the symbolism (because I think it is sort of ...

Thanks everyone for your great critiques! I absolutley agree with pretty much everything you guys said and loved the feedback! Very helpful! And to answer the question on how long ...

I like this! It's a good concept and I like the personiphication of fear that you made from the begining to end. The first verse: "Something is knocking the window ...

This is my first try at symbolism... It's long and I'm up for any changes you suggest. Try to read between the lines and tell me if you get it! ...

I really liked this! It was vivid just enough so that you let the readers mind see what they wanted to see, while at the same time we saw what ...

Though I'm not really sure I understand the point of the poem, I really actualy liked it. It was very smooth and reminded me of the silly poems I would ...

I could really feel the terror the little girl went through from the begining to the end. You captured her character really well and it made the whole piece really ...

This is pretty good! I liked the part when you said, "Remain in the domain of similarity." It flowed really well. While I read it I could sense the feeling ...

I like this. I found it a bit confusing but I can see the potential that the story holds. I was hoping that you would explain it more in detail ...

This is my poem on life: Life It’s a short story that everyone wishes Would last just a little longer. A race that seems too long while you run it, ...

Hey everyone! Thanks for reading this! :D I'm new here and desperatley need help getting started! I'm not really sure what I'm doing but I know it's about writing and ...