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greatly loved... i'm jealous now!!

You are a great writer and if you need help just add me as a friend!!!

This is truely great work!! who says a short poem can't be better than a long one? wow!!!

pheunominal!! I loved the 2nd stanza the best... :)

interesting topic choice, but a few minor corrections, as matt mentioned, should be made. :)

I would say I liked it but it made me feel like I was in church...

yes, yes, yes... uh no? the begining was great but you lost me at the end.

I really enjoyed it, you had me on the edge of my computer chair! (literally... then fell off) *****

I am also new... but welcome! buddy me?

Why am I so stupid, not to even believe? That all the world around me, has nothing to concieve. They don't know who I am, but can read me like ...

I know that i'm not perfect, but you better know I tried. You'll never get to see, the many tears i've cried. Sometimes I don't get, why you can't see ...

wonderful, I really must say! You definantly should continue that... I would love to see what happens next!