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A beautifully dead angel By: Emily A dead angel, With broken wings. Stands in front of the ocean, And beautifully sings. She’s so gorgeous, Her long hair tied back. I ...

I think that this is very sweet. Have you had thoughts of showing it to him when conditions permit?

ermm.. there's somthing missing..

umm.. more like a story oppose to a poem.. call it prose may i?

wonderful... might I add that you are a beautiful poet?

amazing... wish others felt the same about my poetry:(

It's me again.. just adding that you should maybe add a title such as "angelo"

too vague.... but still makes me want more and more and more... :) however, elaborate on the topic....:)

I read this again and think"wow".. yet there is still something missing.

you are a great poet.

I really like this poem... it gives the reader a feeling of both mental pain and irony. It's like I could put myself in this position and feel how everyone ...

very nice,but set a little more imagery up for the reader... liked it *****

it was a nice composition I have to say... but it is missing substance. In other words... maybe add somethings to it.... the repetition worked wonders for this piece though.

nothing to hate it for at all... in fact it was okay cept 4 the repetition

the repettitition kept my attention,but if you were truely afraid of nothing, you are contradicting that thought.